Living Things
by Danielle Fong
analogies, once preserved as mere notes, find harmony as poetry
organizations
relationships
communities
as living entities
as where no one cell holds the soul of a person
no one person, incarnate
may form all essence of a community
nor live throughout its lifetime
wholly part
as one cell expires
one soul retires
others, some new, fill their place
generations cycle
yet something remains
an living entity unto itself
though it may be true
that some people or ideas
resemble vital organs
the liver, to filter
the stomach, to process
the lung, to supply
the mind, to direct
the heart, to power
too often
transplanted,
perfectly good hearts
from one being to another
from one community to another
raise immune reactions
edicts like allergens
mobs like histamines
without disarmament
no transplant succeeds
no hire, restructuring, or revolution carried through
without somehow disabling
or surviving
societal antibodies
for some, it seems
while becoming part of a great organization
or movement
or organism
they enter through digestive tracts
to supply the raw stuff
the best
carbon, iron, calcium, oxygen
skills, goals, ideas, selves
are prepared
and cooked
chewed
dissolved
filtered
processed
and made, finally, into a part of something new
to fit some other master plan
a genetic blueprint
an ideology
a mission
a politic
for some
no greatness of which they are part
could come to redefine them
their raw stuff
the parts comprising
can find no better molecule
no further local minima
no structure more solid
between surrounding stomach walls
they are indigestible
or too delicate
too beautiful
too unique
to be eaten
their soul to realize
as part only whole
of something profound,
meaningful,
believed in
or as the kernel of a gem
of another body
of an essence of its own
starting anew
There are some perfect lines here (‘edicts like allergens / mobs like histamines / without disarmament / no transplant succeeds’) Sharp juxtapositions that reveal the truth of your metaphors. Perhaps verse really is the most effective means of communication. I’ve always hoped as much.
Like the Minimalist Structure :)
Plurality and Singularity Entertwined.
This is way better when you say it out loud.